I. Cannot. Win.
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agilebritWell. Opening scene is now a good 80% better than it was. I'm happier with it. I'm not going to say it "doesn't suck" anymore, because I kind of think it still does, just...not as much.
And, in the midst of this edit, I somehow lost not!Harry's sarcasm. HOW did that happen???
*glares @ Antubis* And, no, Fuzzybutt, I'm not going to drop an f-bomb in my third paragraph. WTF. Even though I think it kind of fits there.
And, in the midst of this edit, I somehow lost not!Harry's sarcasm. HOW did that happen???
*glares @ Antubis* And, no, Fuzzybutt, I'm not going to drop an f-bomb in my third paragraph. WTF. Even though I think it kind of fits there.
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